Thursday, May 21, 2009

creek side camp
a trickle amongst
the stars

at dawn
the sky drained of darkness

4 comments:

el coyote said...

I'll take the hokku fellas...
I'm thinking Kasen format, starting with winter (far right hand collumn)

bandit said...

works for me-thanks for this tanka.

T.Migratorius said...

nice one...
I see your camping trip was inspirational!

bluetoque said...

Wonderful el coyote. Takes me camping.